Victor's going to put his on his ipad, so you can hear it. And then you can ask him comments and questions when he's finished. . . oh, oh. wait, wait, I have to have a secretary, who's my secretary? Secretary, would you take ideas down. Jot them down for us.
oh sorry.
go ahead. Let's listen.
[ipad-voiceover] "I went to camp while I was eating my breakfast I saw great pizzas raining from the sky I went outside and yummy white popcorn. . .outside and grabbed up more pizza.  I ate so much, I threw up. The end.
Ryan
My hand wasn't up.
You.
I liked the part where.
Can't hear you. Start again
hmm I liked the part where you were going to camp.
ya.
What do you say?
Thank you.
Shoppy.
Pick  people with hands up, please. Be appropriate. Hurry please, just pick.
Mark
I like the part where its said that you threw up at lunch and you threw up at dinner.
I liked your story.  I think you should slow. . . put more punctuation.